not for minors so please if
you're not ready for this just dont click the link...anyhow....i
forwarded this in a series of SMSes at one per day...the response to it
was nice and i just wanted to share it with minna... i did it in a way
where you can copy it and fill in the blanks with your name and the
name of your ichiban or koibito as long as he's a
man...hehehe...
You couldn't sleep, it was a
hot summer night at the beach you and your friends went to. Everyone
was already asleep but your minds was racing with thoughts of the day
that passed. Did (ichiban's name) really mean what he said? That when
he falls in love again it would be real? Is he showing her signs? You
thought this was very confusing. The waters will calm you, you thought
as you let the warm sea calm you. Letting the water reach your
shoulders, you were about to try floating when you heard a big splash
behind you. You turned around to see who it was but found no one
behind you or anywhere in particular! You just shruged but you felt
something grab you by the waist. You gave a shriek as it came out of
the water in front of you. It was (ichiban's name) laughing at you.
"What'd you do that for?"
He just kept laughing. "Let me go, baka!!" He still didn't stop but only held her tighter.
"Oi, I said let me go!" you fumed.
"I can't let you go!" he
chuckled through his heart-stopping smile and then stared at you
intently. You wondered if he was playing a joke on you. Like he
usually did with people.
"Eh?" you were really pissed
and giddy at the same time. Here you are in the very arms that you
longed to be holding you for the longest time.
"Just as said, I can't let you go because you're not a strong swimmer"
"But its shallow here!" you said vehemently.
"It won't be in two more minutes" You just noticed that the tide was
already coming in and the water is now just below your chin. He smiled into your eyes, you felt weaker by the moment.
"But how'd you know I was here?" you asked quickly, trying to veer your thoughts away from his gaze.
"I couldn't sleep. I kept tossing and turning, thinking about you
(your name). I was going to wait for tomorrow to talk to you about
what I said this morning but I really had to see you. I saw you leave
your cabin and followed you here"
"Oh," you couldn't help but look into his smiling eyes that were
getting too intense as each momnet passed, "so what did you want to
say?"
" I just wanted to clear out," (ichiban's name) started," that I had meant what I said in the game this evening...."
"Eh? which part? That you're just kidding?" you looked away feeling a bit disappointed, "because if that's it_"
"Iie," (ichiban's name) snapped, " i mean, iie, I meant every word. If
there was anyone I'd rather be with my entire life that would be you,
(your name)"
"I-" you froze. Unable to believe your ears. But you saw the
sincerity in his eyes and you felt it in his touch. How he wanted to
protect you from the world. As you melted in his embrace, his hand
wandered to your nape and another steadied you , bringing you even
closer if possible. you wrapped your arms around his neck. You
closed your eyes as your hear beat faster and leaned into his kiss. It
felt so right to be in (ichiban's name)'s arms, the tenderness spoke
for itself. You felt him steer the both of you towards the shore. The
kiss became passionate. All the longing and waiting and pent-up
passion waiting to break free. You felt his ugrency as he laid you on
the warm sand, his eyes asking the question you have always wanted to
answer.
"(ichiban's name), I've always loved you", you then took his hand and slipped it into your bikini.
"(ichiban's name)", you said with a sharp intake of breath. Your head
reeling with the sweet sensations he made you feel, almost drawing you
over the edge as ke kissed you hungrily. You know he wanted more as
you did.
He pulled away from your arms, "(your name), you dont' know jsut how much I love you. " His voice and breathing ragged.
" Then show me," you whispered to him softly.
"but it's too soon, I-"
You silenced him with another kiss and drew his hand away from your
bikini. you raised yourslef off the sand and pushed him down on his
back, straddling him.
"(your name), wha-"
You stripped off your top and undid the strings of your black bikini, throwing them aside. (ichiban's name)'s stare burned.
"(your name), please....) he pleaded for you to go on. He helped you
relese himself from swimming trunks. You then lowered yourself ever so
slowly onto him. Filling every inch of your senses. After that, the
world seemed to disappear and nothing mattered. The longing that was
being appeased with the love they shared. The tension that was
building up until the final hues of exquisite rapture. Their cries
muffled by the pounding surf. you laid your head on (ichiban's name)
chest, hearing his heart beat in time with yours.
"(you name), I love you. I meant that.", (ichiban's name) said as he stroked your cheek.
"I know," you said and you believe it to be true.
~end~
hope minna liked it!! yoroshiku ne...
Comments
It was soo cute, and of course who wouldn't want to experience such a thing...=D
Private, demo how come you write your thought down?
AnitafromH~ ahh...~blushes~ i have a very vivid imagination...aside from the fact that i did experience being loved like that...~blushes even more~
Choshi ~doumo imouto...kekeke...hope you liked the 2 others i just sent you thru SMS over last week...~huggles~
naoko ~i'm happy you liked it...~blushes~
hi again ^__^
actually i already read this last night (or should i say this early morning XD) and while i'm typing my comment for this fanfic, the electricity was gone because of the storm x___x
anyway,
i love the "swimming" scene *blushes*
and like your other fanfics, i also like this ;)
geez! you're so good! i hope i can write a story like this but i'm not good in writing/composition so.... yeah... XD
keep it up and i'll wait for your next fanfic :)